Monday, June 20, 2016

Rugby clinic writing

In writing I am learning to use detail to make my story interesting. I feel proud because I know how to spell. I need to improve on my punctuation.

1 comment:

Miss Kim said...

Excellent work, Avah! I like how you add detail to your writing by writing more than two sentences about the game to explain it. Let's work on adding WOW words to make our writing interesting.