Avah @ Elm Park School
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Monday, October 21, 2019
Tuesday, October 15, 2019
My Recount Writing
My Reflection
I was learning to write a recount in a given time. I had to choose a activity I did in the holidays and write in using my 5 W's. If I did this again I would add more detail to make it more interesting because I think it would've made more detail. Next time I want to learn how to make my conclusion more interesting.
Friday, September 27, 2019
My Narrative Writing!
My Reflection
I was learning to write a Narrative writing. I had to follow my success criteria and write my introduction, body 1 and 2 and my conclusion using the success criteria. If I did this again I would plan it differently because it may have sounded better if I would've planned it differently. Next time I want to learn about how I can use different strategies to make my writing better.
Thursday, September 12, 2019
Narrative writing plan
My Reflection
I was learning to plan for my narrative writing. I had to come up with names and sort out where my setting was gonna be and the times it would take place so it would make more sense when I write my real copy. If I did this again I would maybe add more minor people or add more creative words because it might've sounded better. Next time I will be learning how to structure a narrative writing.
Thursday, September 5, 2019
Monday, September 2, 2019
My Speech!
Reflection
I was learning to write a argumentative speech using PEEL paragraphs. I had to use PEEL paragraphs and then my introduction and conclusion. If i did my speech again I would add more adjectives and make it more interesting because it could've been more better if I added more adjectives and make it more interesting. Next time I want to learn about different types of topics for speeches so I can do a different topic that could be more interesting.
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